Nice name and icon! I do have to ask, though: why put yourself down by saying what you make sucks? There are TONS of artists around here who make damn good electronic music, but I somehow doubt they sprang right out of the gate with stuff that would get thousands of bumps. Why not ask them for tips on how they improved? What you have isn't bad, and you'll get better as you make more.

That being said, I like Define Rendered; it's a very unique track. Hope you'll post more one of these days. :)